建议信写作
作者: 李全忠
情境呈现
假定你是Susan,你的朋友徐婷因为父母在外地工作,总是在放学后感到孤单,向你写邮件寻求帮助。请你给她回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示安慰;
2. 提出建议;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【佳作赏析】
写作指导
Step 1 文体感知
建议信是书信的一种形式,属于应用文。建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告,有可能是写给个人,就收信人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点;也可能是写给某个组织或机构,就改进其服务等方面提出建议。建议信的主要人称为第一、二人称,时态以一般现在时为主。
Step 2 谋篇布局
Step 3 高分模板
(日期)
Dear ,
Im sorry that you are having trouble in (问题). However, the situation iseasy to change if you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you.
First(ly), why not (建议1)? If you do this, (原因1). Second(ly),you should/can (建议2). Then/That way, (原因2). Third(ly), it wouldbe a good idea if (建议3). By doing this, (原因3). Last but not least,(建议4).
hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours sincerely,
Step 4 语言组织
建议信开篇常用句式:
1. Learning/Knowing that..., Id like to give some useful suggestions. 得知……,我想提供一些有用的建议。
2. I am writing to express my views concerning... 我现在写信是想表达我对……的看法。
3. My suggestions are as follows. 我的建议如下。
4. Im sorry to hear that you are having trouble in making friends. Such problems arequite normal. 我很遗憾听说你在交朋友方面有困难。(出现)这样的问题是很正常的。
5. I have received your letter saying you plan to pay a visit to China for a week nextmonth. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信,信上说你打算下个月来参观中国一周。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。
6. You have asked me for my advice on how to learn Chinese, and I will try to makesome suggestions here. 你就如何学习汉语询问我的建议,我试着在这给出一些建议。
7. Im very glad to receive your e⁃mail. Now Im writing to give you some advice onhow to learn English well in high school. 我很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在,关于如何在高中学好英语,我写信给你提一些建议。
建议信主体部分常用句式:
1. Firstly, why not join a club? If you do this, you can make more friends. 首先,为什么不参加一个俱乐部?你如果这样做的话,会交到更多的朋友。
2. Secondly, you should try to talk with others. That way, you will feel more confident.其次,你应该尽力与他人交谈。这样,你会感觉更加自信。
3. Thirdly, it would be a good idea to read a book or listen to music. By doing this, youwill calm yourself down. 第三,看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。这样做的话,你就会使自己平静下来。
4. Last but not least, youd better talk with your parents first. 最后但同等重要的是,你最好先和你的父母谈一谈。
5. As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, you should help each other. 就我而言/在我看来,你们应该互相帮助。
6. Its important to have a balanced diet. 保持均衡饮食非常重要。
7. As time goes on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with youif you can follow the above advice. 如果你遵从以上建议,随着时间的推移,人们会更加了解你,并且愿意和你交朋友。
8. Im sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and healthier. 我坚信,如果你采取我的建议,你会变得更加苗条,更加健康。
建议信结尾常用句式:
1. I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 我希望这些建议对你有帮助。
2. I hope my suggestions will be of some help. 我希望我的建议能有所帮助。
3. I will appreciate it if you would consider my suggestion. 如果您能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。
4. I believe that if you follow my advice, youll get along well with your classmates. 我相信,如果你听从我的建议,你会和同学们相处得很好。
建议信常用关联词:
to begin with, in addition, furthermore, finally(首先,另外,再者,最后)
first, second, besides, last but not least(首先,其次,此外,最后但同样重要的是)
most important of all, moreover, finally(最重要的是,此外,最后)
for one thing, for another(一则,二则)
on the one hand, on the other hand(一方面,另一方面)
即时训练
假定你是李华,你的留学生好友Jim上周与他的朋友Stephen之间产生了一些误会,他写邮件告诉你他计划与Stephen和好,希望你给出建议。请你给他回一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 给出建议;
3. 表达祝愿。
5 July 2023
Dear Jim,
评价导思
√ Are all the parts of a letter included and organized in a good order?
√ Do you give reasons for the advice?
√ Do you use proper expressions to give suggestions?
√ Do you use commas (逗号) and full stops correctly?
√ Is the handwriting easy to read?