My Dream
作者： 马一铭When it comes to what I want to be in the future，I will say without hesitation that being an engineer is my dream job. When I was a little boy，I always dreamt that I could fly the plane in the sky which is made by our own team. Also，I think it is an honor for me to play a role in the development of China.
To realize my dream，I think I should make an effort to study and develop effective learning methods. Besides， developing good study habits can help me improve. More importantly，I should also keep a positive attitude， which can benefit me a lot.
As the saying goes， “Where there is a will， there is a way.”I believe that l will make my dream come true one day through continuing efforts.
河南省郑州市第四十七初级中学
指导老师 王丽荣
点评
作者依次讲述了自己的梦想是成为工程师、为什么想成为工程师以及现在应该从哪些方面努力来实现自己的梦想。习作词汇丰富，句式多样，如运用宾语从句、定语从句、动名词做主语、to do不定式表目的等。