Fried Rice with Eggs

Everyone has their hobbies. I’m no exception. My hobby is cooking. In my opinion， cooking is a great way to improve myself. Now， let me teach you how to make fried rice with eggs.

First， you need to prepare a bowl of steamed rice， some eggs， some hams and some vegetables. Then wash the vegetables and cut them up. Next， break the eggs into a bowl and stir them. After that， pour some oil into the pan and heat it.When the oil is hot， put the egg mixture into the pan. Wait for a minute， put the steamed rice， vegetables， and hams into the pan and fry them with the egg mixture. Finally， don’t forget to add some salt. It can make your food more delicious.

Now， you know all steps. Why not try it by yourself I’m waiting for your good news！

河南省郑州市第八十二中学

指导老师 王志强

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