2022年12月大学英语四、六级作文试题评析（二）

四级

Directions： For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the role of physical exercise in achieving success at college. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

这道大学英语四级作文试题要求考生论述体育锻炼对大学生在学校里取得成功所起的作用。大学生在校期间可在多个方面取得成功，但主要是学业方面。因此，我们不妨着重论述体育锻炼对大学生取得学业成功所起的作用。

本文可以写三个段落。

第一段开宗明义，指出体育锻炼对于大学生在学校里的表现一直起着关键作用。然后引用上海大学对其2022届学生所做的一项调查作为支撑：经常参加体育锻炼的学生更有可能在校园里获得学业成功。这样我们就引出了本文所要讨论的话题。

第二段论述为什么体育锻炼对大学生取得成功很重要。我们不妨从身体健康和心理健康两个方面展开论述。首先，经常参加体育活动可以降低大学生的患病风险，改善他们的身体健康状况，而身体健康是他们得以好好学习的重要前提。其次，经常参加体育锻炼也有利于大学生的心理和情绪健康。比如，只需锻炼一阵子就能增强他们的幸福感，让他们在课上表现得更好，在考试中拿到更高的分数。

本文可以用建议法结尾。第三段先总结全文，指出参加体育锻炼对大学生获得成功至关重要，然后建议各所大学更加重视改进体育设施并鼓励大学生参加体育活动。

下面请看参考范文：

Physical exercise has always played a key role in a student’ performance at college. A Shanghai University study surveyed its class of 2022 and found that students who regularly participate in physical exercise have a better chance of achieving academic success on campus.

Why is physical exercise so important for college students？ Engaging in regular physical activity helps college students to lower their risk of disease and improve their physical health， which is an essential prerequisite for their studies. The benefits of sports are not limited to just the physical， however. College students who work out regularly also see improvement in their mental and emotional health. For instance， a single bout of exercise can increase their sense of well-being， contributing to their performing better in class and scoring higher in exams.

Taking part in physical exercise is crucial for college students’ performance on campus. Therefore， it is advised that colleges and universities attach more importance to upgrading sports facilities and encouraging students to be physically active. （166 words）

语言亮点借鉴：

1. Engaging in regular physical activity helps college students to lower their risk of disease and improve their physical health， which is an essential prerequisite for their studies. 经常参加体育活动可以帮助大学生降低生病的风险，改善他们的身体健康状况，而身体健康是他们学习的一个重要前提条件。

2. College students who work out regularly also see improvement in their mental and emotional health. 经常锻炼的大学生在心理和情绪健康方面也能有所改善。work out锻炼。

3. For instance， a single bout of exercise can increase their sense of well-being， contributing to their performing better in class and scoring higher in exams. 比如，只需锻炼一阵子就可以增强他们的幸福感，让他们在课上表现得更好，在考试中拿到更高的分数。a bout of一阵子。

4. Therefore， it is advised that colleges and universities attach more importance to upgrading sports facilities and encouraging students to be physically active. 因此，建议各所大学更加重视改进体育设施并鼓励学生积极锻炼。it is advised that... 建议，后面的从句要用虚拟语气。attach more importance to doing sth更加重视做某事。

六级

Directions： For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence “In an era of information explosion， it is vitally important to develop the ability to think critically and make rational choices.” You can make statements， give reasons， or cite examples to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

这道大学英语六级作文试题要求考生论述，在信息爆炸的时代，培养批判性思考能力和作出理性选择的重要性。虽然题目中包括两个方面的重要性，但重点应放在论述培养批判性思考能力的重要性上，因为作出理性选择是具有批判性思考能力的自然结果。

本文可以写三个段落。

第一段先指出在信息爆炸的时代，批判性思考能力和作出理性选择很重要。然后指出批判性思维在我们人生的每一个方面都至关重要，无论是在学术研究方面，还是在职业方面。这样我们就引出了本文所要讨论的话题。

第二段论述培养批判性思考能力的重要性。为了把一个观点论述透彻，我们要善于从不同的方面或角度展开论述。就本文而言，我们可以从以下三个方面论述培养批判性思考能力的重要性。首先，批判性思考能力在我们读大学的时候很重要，因为它能让我们辨别出哪些信息可以写进我们的论文。其次，批判性思考能力在职场上也非常重要，因为它能让我们打破常规思维模式。然后，我们可以引用约翰斯·霍普金斯大学的一项研究来佐证这个分论点。最后，批判性思考能力还能让我们的生活更加轻松，因为通过批判性思考，我们能够用创造性的方法解决现实生活中的问题，比如更高效地给鱼去鳞，延长面包的保鲜时间。

本文可以用建议法结尾。第三段先总结全文，指出在这个信息爆炸的时代，批判性思考能力对我们的工作和生活都极其重要，具备批判性思考能力的人总能作出最好的选择，总能创造性地解决问题。最后，建议各所大学加大力度培养学生的批判性思考能力。

下面请看参考范文：

In an era of information explosion， it is vitally important to develop the ability to think critically and make rational choices. Indeed， critical thinking is of paramount importance in virtually every sphere of our life， be it in academic research or in  professional career.

Critical thinking is important when we are at college. It helps us to identify reliable sources of information that we can cite in our papers. It is also one of the most desirable skills in the workplace， as it helps us think outside the box. Little wonder that one Johns Hopkins University study ranked the ability to think critically as the top skill in the 21st century. Additionally， being able to think critically makes life easier. For instance， by practicing critical thinking， we can solve real-life problems， from scaling a fish more efficiently to keeping bread fresh for a longer time， in creative ways.

Critical thinking is essential for our work and life in this information age. Critical thinkers always make the best choices and deal with problems creatively. Therefore， schools and universities should devote more efforts to developing critical thinking in their students. （188 words）

语言亮点借鉴：

1. It is also one of the most desirable skills in the workplace， as it helps us think outside the box. 批判性思考能力还是职场上最应该具备的技能之一，因为它能帮助我们打破常规思维模式。think outside the box 跳出思维定式；创造性地思考。

2. Little wonder that one Johns Hopkins University study ranked the ability to think critically as the top skill in the 21st century. 难怪约翰斯·霍普金斯大学的一项研究把批判性思考能力列为21世纪最重要的技能。Little/Small/No wonder （that）... 难怪……。

3. Critical thinkers always make the best choices and deal with problems creatively. 具有批判性思考能力的人总会作出最好的选择，并且能够创造性地解决问题。

4. Therefore， schools and universities should devote more efforts to developing critical thinking in their students. 因此，各所大学应当加大力度培养学生的批判性思考能力。devote more efforts to doing sth加大做某事的力度。