Writing 话题表达指导

话题介绍

话题：友谊。要求通过对本单元核心知识的学习，能够依据所给的与友谊有关的材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写（150词左右），完成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。续写部分要做到想象合理、衔接自然、内容通顺、逻辑合理。

注意事项：

1. 注意与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；

2. 情节设计要合理，续写的部分应该是故事的高潮和结尾部分， 所以不能有太多的旁枝；

3. 不能随意添加故事的人物，续写内容不宜过度追求标新立异。

题例导学

题目

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Ella had two exams that day—physics and history. She really hated physics. It was her worst subject. Kim looked at her， and then looked away quickly. Ella thought Kim looked pleased， because she didn’t have a problem with physics， she didn’t have a problem with anything… Miss Perfect！

“I thought we were friends， but she hasn’t spoken to me for two weeks now. She promised to help me go over for the physics exam too， but then she’s forgotten all my calls and texts. And when I rang her house， her mom just told me she was busy，” Ella thought angrily. At that moment， Mr Reed asked all the students into the exam room.

Ella couldn’t answer some physics questions. Suddenly she saw Kim sitting two rows in front of her. Ella couldn’t believe it！ Kim was holding her phone on her knee under the desk and reading from it. Is that how Kim always got such good grades？ She felt really angry at Kim， and thought about telling the teacher， but… “Stop writing，” said Mr Reed and started to collect the exam papers. Oh no， Ella hadn’t answered two of the questions. She was going to fail again！

Ella wanted to talk to Kim at lunchtime， but she couldn’t find her anywhere. Ella went to the library to prepare for the history exam， which was her favorite. But she couldn’t concentrate （专心）. “Unfair！ Kim was getting good grades by cheating all the time.” She thought about telling a teacher， but everyone would hate her if she did that. Just then， Mr Reed walked past her table. “Mr Reed…”

Ella was sitting behind Kim again in the history exam that afternoon. Mr Reed wanted her to look at Kim and agreed if she saw that Kim was cheating in the exam.

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

Ella was working on the last question when she saw that Kim had her phone under the desk.

Ella was walking toward the school gate when she saw Kim waiting for her there.

思路引导

本题是让学生续写一篇与友谊有关的记叙文，审题时要注意以下几点：

1. 根据给出的“开头语”确定写什么；

2. 根据阅读文段的相关内容明确怎么写；

3. 注意人称、时态等方面的问题。

范例展示

Ella was working on the last question when she saw that Kim had her phone under the desk. Ella nodded to Mr Reed. Mr Reed went to Kim quietly and picked up Kim’s phone. With all clear， Mr Reed asked her to leave the classroom. Kim walked out crying. Everyone was staring at her and Ella felt really relaxed.

Ella was walking toward the school gate when she saw Kim waiting for her there. “Ella， please wait，” Kim said. “I’m sorry I haven’t answered any of your calls， but my dad’s been ill for two weeks and had a heart operation today. During exams I was reading texts from my mom to see how it was going. I have explained to Mr Reed and he asked me to take the exam again. I’m sorry I didn’t tell you what was happening.” Ella couldn’t help crying， “You should have told me this earlier. Let me know if you have difficulties. We are true friends.”

话题表达

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段， 使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Scout could clearly remember the night when she had to leave her home in Poland. It was the beginning of the Second World War and her family needed to run away as soon as possible. She quickly packed a suitcase with a few pieces of clothing， her diary， and her most prized thing， a silk scarf. Scout and her best friend， Betty， had asked their parents to buy them matching scarves， which they took as a symbol of their friendship. Scout didn’t know she was going to America and would not be returning.