Me and My Favorite Teacher

Hello， boys and girls. Now let me tell you something about me and I favorite teacher. My name is Wang Feng. I’m 12. My birthday is on May 6th. Ibest like red于. I like eating vegetables. I love playing basketball. My favoritesubject is math. My classes start at 8 a.m. I go home at 6 p.m. On Friday， I havean art lesson for two hours after school.

My favorite teacher is Miss Li. She is 26. Her birthday is on March 2nd.Her favorite color is black. She likes fruit. She likes playing tennis. She likesEnglish and she is our English teacher. She goes to school at 7：30 a.m. Shegoes home at 6：30 p.m. She plays tennis for an hour every evening. I like her.She is interesting. Her classes are relaxing.

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本文作者做了自我介绍并描绘了一位教师，表达了对这位教师的敬爱之情。全文语言表达简洁流畅；文章结构完整、逻辑清晰，是一篇合格的学生习作。

需要修改的地方院

①I 改为my。名词前面应使用所有格my 来表达个人所属。

②I best like red.改为My favorite color is red.表达“最喜欢的……”用favorite。

③I like her. She is interesting. Her classes are relaxing.改为I like her becauseshe is interesting and her classes are relaxing.使用连接词让表达更有逻辑性。

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按中考英语作文满分15 分的评分标准，本文修改前可得13 分。