My dog saved my life救命犬

作者: 李全忠

My dog saved my life救命犬0

作者坐轮椅和自己的狗出去散步,在回程中突发事故,作者的轮椅翻倒并滚下路堤,掉进了泥水里,作者右腿受伤,摔倒在地……

1 It was the 9th of January, a day I will remember for along time. It was a normal Sunday morning around 8:30 am,right on time for Sammy’s morning walk. I didn’t walk becauseof my lameness, so I rode in my power wheelchair. We got outthe door and made our way towards a property near my apartmentcomplex. We got to the gate and out of the complex, andwe went left onto the extra wide sidewalk. It was about a mile’swalk one way, passing a firehouse on the right side of the road,before we turned around and started back.

2 Along the path we took was a large plate over the sidewalk. I passed over it the firsttime without any problems. My wheelchair could reach up to 8 miles per hour, but we wenta little slower on our walks, around 2 miles per hour, so Sammy could keep up. Even so,this speed was pretty fast for a 15yearolddog.

3 As we turned around and made our way back, I passed over the sidewalk plate againexcept that this time it was moved without me realizing it, putting my wheelchair in thegrass on the embankment (路堤). The next thing I knew, my wheelchair started to tip over,throwing me out of the chair and rolling down the embankment into the muddy water below.

4 My right leg was hurt, and I was unable to pull myself upright. I was too weak togather my strength to call for help. The muddy water was cold and I felt it hard to breathewith my body folded and twisted in a strange position. Meanwhile, Sammy was sitting up onthe sidewalk with his leash (链条) caught under the tipped over wheelchair. I heard him barking louder than ever heard. He knew that I was hurt and was in danger.

5 By the way my wheelchair tipped over, a passerbyon the street would not be able tosee it from the road. All anyone could see was a dog barking on the sidewalk almost nightacross the street near the firehouse.

Reading Check

阅读上面的短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。

注意:

1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;

2. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好。

Paragraph 1:

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Paragraph 2:

Three firemen came to my dogs aid finally._____________________________________

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写作导引

一、语篇研读

(一)基本要素

(二)主题探索

What is the text about? And what does the author want to tell us?

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二、续写布局

根据续写第一段段首句的内容“我能看出来萨米是想帮我”可知,续写第一段可描写萨米想尽办法寻求帮助。具体内容我们可根据以下问题链来展开:

1. What did Sammy feel and what did he do?

2. How did I feel and what did I do?

3. What is the result?

根据续写第二段段首句的内容“三个消防员终于来帮助我的狗了”可知,续写第二段可描写“我”和狗被救的过程。具体内容我们可根据以下问题链来展开:

1. Where did the firemen do?

2. How did Sammy feel?

3. What lesson did I learn from this experience?

续写线索:狗叫—寻求帮助—被消防人员发现—被救—感悟

三、语言学习

(一)词块

(二)句式

1. 并列句

My right leg was hurt, and I was unable to pull myself upright. (Para. 4)

The muddy water was cold and I felt it hard to breathe with my body folded and twisted in a strange position. (Para. 4)

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