跟着名著学续写之体育运动

从主题语境的分类来看，体育运动主题既属于人与自我，又属于人与社会的范畴。体育运动涉及体育活动、体育与健康、体育精神及体育赛事等话题，在读后续写中体育精神和体育赛事话题较为常见。体育精神和体育赛事类文章主要讲如何面对失败做自我反思，进而克服困难，最终实现梦想；或在同伴的协助下取得团队胜利，或在同伴及家人的鼓励下取得比赛成功的故事，体现了坚持不懈、团结合作、友谊至上的体育精神。

本次读后续写体育运动类专题将以《因爱而跑》里面的主角基普桑和崔这对热爱跑步的好朋友参加跑步比赛为例，阐述体育运动赛事类的三部曲：比赛前的场景，比赛过程中的拼搏与坚持，比赛后的感悟和收获。

主题微语境

《因爱而跑》讲述了主人公基普桑和他的好友崔对跑步怀着满腔热血，渴望一起“跑”出去，在家人和乡亲们的鼓励下，克服重重困难，最终实现了梦想的故事。这个故事体现了坚持不懈、团结合作的体育精神。

一、比赛前的场景

比赛前的场景描写包括对体育馆环境和场面的描写，其中重点突出观众的热情、参赛选手的紧张等方面的描写。

1. Spectators thronged the noisy stadium. Loudspeakers boomed and crackled asthey announced the events. There were so many competitors that several heats had been arranged for each event. Kipsang felt nervous and his stomach seemed to be tied in knots.He began to fret that he wouldnt be able to run. 观众们聚集在嘈杂的体育场。当宣布比赛事宜时，扩音器里传来轰轰声和噼啪声。因为参赛者众多，每项比赛都安排了几场预赛。基普桑很紧张，他的胃好像揪成了一团。他开始担心自己不能跑了。（比赛前的环境描写和紧张的心理描写）

2. The bright modern stadium was packed with thousands of people， and bandsplayed lively tunes as the teams waited to enter the arena. 明亮的现代体育场里挤进了几千人，当队员们候场时，乐队演奏着欢快的音乐。（比赛前的环境描写）

3. All around the stadium， everyone was excited as they enjoyed the moment， proud tobe there and full of hope and good spirits. 整个体育场内，每个人都兴奋不已。他们享受此时此刻，对自己能参加奥运会而倍感骄傲，他们满怀希望、斗志昂扬。（比赛前的环境描写、表现运动员自豪的心理描写和动作描写）

4. With their hearts thumping， they noticed a lit‑up area with people sitting around ingroups. 他们注意到一块灯火通明的地方，人们三五成群地坐在一起，他们的心怦怦跳了起来。（本句先写心理，后写视觉，表现了紧张忐忑的心情）

5. He qualified！ His big day arrived at last. Kipsang stood nervously at the startingline. Would he perform well？ How could he beat all these world‑class runners？ He felt butterfliesfluttering around inside him. 他进决赛了！这个重要的日子终于来了。基普桑紧张地站在起跑线上。他能跑好吗？他怎么才能打败其他所有这些世界级跑步运动员呢？他感觉心里七上八下的。（比赛前既期待又紧张的复杂情绪的心理描写）

6. All these questions were distracting him. Sternly he told himself to breathe deeply，relax and concentrate. He imagined he was back at home and on his way to school，running fleet‑footed like a gazelle. The loudspeakers boomed， announcing each competitors name in turn. The crowd roared. The athletes took up their starting positions. Kipsangs heart skipped. 这些问题正在分散他的注意力。但是他严厉地告诉自己，要深呼吸，要放松，要集中精力。他想象自己回到家乡，在上学的路上，像一只羚羊一样敏捷快速地跑着。扩音器响了起来，依次介绍每名参赛选手的名字。观众们欢呼起来。选手们准备好起跑姿势。基普桑的心都要跳出来了。（比赛前的心理描写和环境描写）

二、比赛过程中的拼搏与坚持

比赛过程的描写主要包括表现参赛选手顽强拼搏、坚持不懈的动作描写、心理描写以及观众反应的描写等。

1. The starting gun fired and the boys bolted down the track. Surprised at how quicklyeveryone was running， Kipsang had to make a determined effort to stretch out and staynear the front. 起跑的枪声响起，男孩们在跑道上飞奔起来。基普桑很惊讶，大家竟然都跑得那么快，他只能拼尽全力迈开步向前跑，并保持在前列。（比赛过程中坚持拼搏的动作描写和心理描写）

2. Every time someone tried to pass him， he just ran harder， faster. As the runnersrounded the last corner， they all put on another burst of speed. Kipsang went faster still.He felt as though his lungs would burst and his legs would give way beneath him. 每次有人想要超过他，他就跑得更努力、更快些。当选手们跑过最后一个弯道时，他们都开始加速冲刺。基普桑还是比他们跑得更快。他觉得他的肺好像快要爆炸，双腿也开始发软。（比赛过程中与对手顽强拼搏的动作描写和心理描写）

3. Kipsang could feel the other runners in the pack close on his heels， but he was determinednot to let anyone pass. Suddenly， someone behind him clipped his heels. Kipsangstumbled. He lurched forward， staggered， but quickly adjusted his stride tokeep his balance. Runners tried to overtake him. He quickened his pace and ran steadily onwards， feeling his heart pounding as he strode forward. 基普桑能感觉到队伍里其他选手们正紧跟在他的身后，但是他下决心绝不能让他们超过去。突然，后面有人撞了一下他的脚踝，基普桑的身体向前打了个趔趄，步伐也不稳了，但是他迅速调整步伐以保持平衡。选手们一直想要超过他。他加快了步伐，继续稳步向前，当他大步地向前跑时，他感到自己的心怦怦直跳。（比赛过程中遇到困难，继续坚持的动作描写）

4. Quickly Kipsang responded， accelerated， and again stepped up his pace， stridingout ahead of the pack， faster and faster. He felt the wind in his face and heard the roarof the crowd. 基普桑迅速做出回应，他加速并加大了步伐，在队伍前面大步跑着，越跑越快。他感觉到风吹在他的脸上，听到人群的欢呼声。（比赛过程中与对手顽强拼搏的一系列的动作描写以及观众的反应）

5. The finish line was not far away now. Could he hang on？ His legs started to acheand his chest tightened. He could hardly breathe. 现在，终点线已经不远了。他能坚持到最后吗？他的双腿开始疼痛，他的胸腔发紧。他简直快不能呼吸了。（比赛过程中遇到困难的心理描写和动作描写）

6. Kipsangs thighs screamed in agony as he gasped for breath. If only he could holdon. Somebody close behind tried to pass him. Kipsang tried with all his might. He had tostay in front. He dug deep and forced his legs further， harder faster. One final effort. Helunged forward over the line， together with the other athlete. 基普桑大口喘息着，他的大腿像在痛苦地尖叫。他要是能坚持下去就好了。紧随其后的人想要超过他。基普桑拼尽了全力。他必须保持在前面。他拼尽全力，迫使双腿继续向前跑，跑得更努力也更快。最后一搏。他和另一名运动员一起冲破终点线。（比赛过程中克服困难，坚持拼搏的动作描写）

三、比赛后的感悟和收获

1. But he kept pushing， harder and harder， until at last he crossed the line just aheadof the others. He was overjoyed. He had done it！ His heart and his head were pounding，but he had won his first race and he was in the final. 但是他继续向前跑，跑得越来越用力，直到最后他在其他人之前率先冲过了终点线。他欣喜若狂。他做到了！他的心和脑袋都在咚咚地响，但是他赢得了他的第一场比赛，并且进入决赛了。（比赛后激动的心理描写）

2. Kipsang tried to catch his breath. His legs wobbled weakly. Anxiously he waitedfor the result. Other runners shook his hand or patted him on the shoulder， but he wasntsure if he could manage to hold on. 基普桑努力地喘息。他的双腿虚弱地颤抖着。他焦急地等待比赛结果。其他选手们跟他握手，或是拍拍他的肩膀，但是他不知道自己能不能坚持住。（动作描写和心理描写，增加了比赛后等待结果的紧张感）