The Sport I Prefer
作者： 石羽溪Hello，everyone！ I am very glad to share my topic with you. It is universally acknowledged that sports play an important role in our lives， which make our lives more colorful and interesting. As for me， I prefer playing basketball.
The reason why I enjoy playing basketball is that it not only enriches my life but also keeps me happy when I am upset. It is this sport that makes me full of energy and confidence. I still remember when I played it at first. I was not proficient. My PE teacher， who is always there for us when we are in trouble， encouraged us with warm words. What he told me was that nothing is impossible if you have a willing heart. Persisting in practicing basketball every day， my diligent efforts finally paid off， bringing me great confidence.
In conclusion， I consider this sport as a symbol of fighting. I will keep practicing it！
河南省郑州金桂中学
指导老师 辛会勤
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这篇文章有效表达了“我”对篮球运动的热爱及其给“我”带来的积极影响。通过“enriches my life”“keeps me happy”等表述，展现了篮球如何丰富生活、带来快乐；同时，
运用强调句式“It is this sport that...”进一步凸显了篮球的重要性。用词贴切，叙述条理清晰，能够很好地激发读者对篮球运动的兴趣，引起共鸣。