What　I　Learned　from　Family

It isuniversally acknowledged that home is our first school in life，where we can learn many meaningful things.What Ihave learned from my family is the importance of getting along well with my family.

WhenIwas8yearsold，Ialwaysfoughtwith mysisterwho was only4 yearsold.The reason why we fought was that both of us wanted to play witha toy.Mysisterwas too youngto grab the toy from me.She cried so loudly that we caught our mother's attention.After knowing the reason， instead of getting mad，she told us，“If a family lives in harmony，all affairs will prosper.”It was herwarm and patient words that made me realize mymistake and feel ashamed and uneasy.In the end，I said sorry to my sister and knew the importance of havinga harmonious family.

Allinall，I'mthankful to myfamilyand whatI havelearned from themis the principle of gettingalongwithpeople.

河南省郑州金桂中学

指导老师 辛会勤

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习作在语言表达上非常成功，能够有效传达作者的思想情感。句式富于变化，恰当使用了一些高级词语准确表意，如“universally acknowledged”“harmony”“prosper”等。在叙述个人经历时，情感表达真挚，如“mademe realizemymistake andfeelashamedand uneasy"。