My First Time to Be a Volunteer

Winston Churchill once said，“Wemakea livingbywhatwe get，but we makea lifebywhat wegive.”Volunteeringisa contribution to the society.Last month，I took part ina community clean-up event.

Inthe event，the volunteersandI swept the street of my community first. Then，we cleaned up some windows outside in the community.In the end，we picked up the rubbish in the center park.

Afterthisevent，Iwastiredbutfullofasense ofaccomplishment.This experience taught me responsibility and the value of giving back.Small actions can make a big difference.I'll continue to volunteer and inspire others to join in creating a better world.

河南省郑州市第八中学

指导老师刘改香

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习作开篇引用丘吉尔的名言引出志愿服务活动的重要性，第二段条理清晰地列举了志愿服务活动的具体内容，结尾段阐述了作者在志愿服务活动中的感受和收获。主题积极而有意义，全文用词简练，表达流畅。