2022年12月大学英语四、六级作文试题评析（三）

四级

Directions： For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the necessity of developing social skills for college students. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

这道大学英语四级作文试题要求考生论述培养大学生社交能力的必要性。换句话说，就是论述培养社交能力对大学生的重要性。

我们可以把这篇作文写成三段。第一段开门见山，指出培养社交能力对今天的大学生特别重要。然后引用上海大学的一项研究作为支撑：有84.2%接受调查的大学生承认在社交中感觉不能应对自如。这样我们就引出了本文所要讨论的话题。第二段论述社交能力对大学生的重要性。为了把一个观点论述得深入透彻，我们要善于从不同的方面或角度展开论述。就本文而言，我们可以从学业和事业两个方面阐述社交能力对大学生的重要性。首先，社交能力对大学生在学校里学业出色至关重要。我们可以援引一项约翰斯·霍普金斯大学的研究来佐证这个分论点：社交能力强的学生取得学业成功的可能性四倍于社交能力差的学生。其次，社交能力还极大地帮助大学生将来的事业。不管做哪一行，他们都得与同事和上司打交道。无论是喜欢还是不喜欢他们，都无法避开他们。所以具备出色的社交能力非常重要。本文可以用建议法结尾。第三段先总结全文，指出良好的社交能力对大学生在校园里取得成功和在职场上脱颖而出都至关重要。然后建议大学更加重视提高大学生的社交能力。下面请看参考范文：

Developing social skills has become particularly important for today’s college students. According to a recent Shanghai University study， 84.2 percent of students polled on campus admitted to feeling inadequate in social interaction.

Developing social skills is key to college students’ academic excellence. A Johns Hopkins University study finds that students who scored high on social skills were four times as likely to shine academically as those who earned low marks in this arena. In other words， social skills are a strong indicator of a student’s academic success. Social skills also help college students’ future career tremendously. Irrespective of what industry they are in， they will have to interact with their colleagues and superiors. Love them or hate them， there’s no getting away from them. So it’s crucially important that they be armed with good social skills.

Strong social skills are essential for college students to succeed on campus and stand out in the workplace. Therefore， colleges and universities should place greater emphasis on improving their students’ interpersonal skills. （168 words）

语言亮点借鉴：

1. A Johns Hopkins University study finds that students who scored high on social skills were four times as likely to shine academically as those who earned low marks in this arena. 约翰斯·霍普金斯大学的一项研究发现，在社交技能方面得分高的学生成绩优秀的可能性四倍于社交得分低的学生。shine 出色，出类拔萃。

2. Irrespective of what industry they are in， they will have to interact with their colleagues and superiors. 无论做哪一行，他们都得与同事和上司沟通交流。irrespective of无论，不管。

3. Love them or hate them， there’s no getting away from them. 无论是喜欢还是不喜欢他们，都无法避开他们。There’s no doing 无法做某事。

4. So it’s crucially important that they be armed with good social skills.所以他们具备良好的社交技能至关重要。be armed with具备。

5. Therefore， colleges and universities should place greater emphasis on improving their students’ interpersonal skills. 所以大学应当更加重视提高大学生的社交能力。place greater emphasis on更加重视。

六级

Directions： For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay that begins with the sentence “With the application of information technology in education， college students can now learn in more diverse and efficient ways.” You can make statements， give reasons， or cite examples to develop your essay. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

随着以互联网为代表的信息技术的发展，近年来教育发生了巨大变化，大学生现在能够用更加多样和高效的方式学习。这道大学英语六级作文试题正是以此为背景，请考生论述信息技术在教育中的重要作用。

本文可以写三个段落。第一段先指出随着信息技术在教育中的应用，大学生现在能够用更加多样和高效的方式学习，然后引用上海大学的一项研究数据来支撑这一点。这样我们就引出了本文所要讨论的话题。第二段论述信息技术在教育中的重要作用。我们可以从三个方面展开论述。首先，移动应用程序和在线平台让学生更容易接受教育。我们不妨以线上教育为例来支持这个分论点：在新冠疫情暴发之后，数以百万计的中国大学生无缝地转到线上教育，从而避免了大规模的停学。其次，信息技术使学生的学习更加容易。一旦信息技术融入了课堂，学生们就能更加轻松和高效地学习。最后，信息技术使个性化学习成为可能。在通过笔记本电脑或移动设备上课的时候，大学生可以按照自己的节奏学习，压力也更少。本文可以用建议法结尾。第三段先指出如果使用得当，信息技术不但可以为大学生创造出更多的学习机会，还可以促进他们的学习。然后建议大学更加重视把技术融入到教育之中。下面请看参考范文：

With the application of information technology in education， college students can now learn in more diverse and efficient ways. A Shanghai University study found that 84.2 percent of its seniors said they learn from various educational websites.

Information technology is playing an increasingly important role in education. Most notably， mobile apps and online platforms have rendered education readily available to students， especially in crisis situations. In the wake of the Covid-19， for instance， millions of college students in China switched seamlessly to low-contact online education， thereby averting large-scale suspension of learning. Apart from that， information technology makes learning easier. Where IT has been successfully integrated into the classroom， students learn more easily and efficiently. New technology also enables personalized learning. When classes take place online via the use of a laptop or mobile device， college students can work at their own pace and with less stress.

When used properly， information technology opens up more learning opportunities for college students and facilitates their learning. Now is the time for colleges and universities to attach more importance to integrating technology into education. （180 words）

语言亮点借鉴：

1. Most notably， mobile apps and online platforms have rendered education readily available to students， especially in crisis situations. 最值得注意的是，移动应用程序和在线平台让学生们很方便地接受教育，在危机情况下尤其如此。render 使变得。

2. Where IT has been successfully integrated into the classroom， students learn more easily and efficiently. 在信息技术被成功融入课堂的情况下，学生学得更容易、更高效。where在……情况下。

3. New technology also enables personalized learning. 新技术还使得个性化学习成为可能。enable 使……成为可能。

4. Now is the time for colleges and universities to attach more importance to integrating technology into education. 现在是大学更加重视把技术融入教育的时候了。Now is the time for sb to do sth现在是某人做某事的时候了。这是一个提建议的常用句型。

* 上海外国语大学国际新闻硕士，讲师，专注大学英语写作教学十余年。